Dialogue & Settings Rewrite | Ace 1000

Chaoneng Tan
Oct 28, 2020

Benedicite!
What early tongue so sweet saluteth me?
Young son, it argues a distemper’d head
So soon to bid good morrow to thy bed:
Care keeps his watch in every old man’s eye,
And where care lodges, sleep will never lie;
But where unbruised youth with unstuff’d brain
Doth couch his limbs, there golden sleep doth reign:
Therefore thy earliness doth me assure
Thou art up-roused by some distemperature;
Or if not so, then here I hit it right,
Our Romeo hath not been in bed to-night.
- FRIAR LAURENCE (Romeo & Juliet)

Why hello there
You seem to be in a bad mood.
It really shows on your face,
perhaps a good nights sleep will resolve that.
You are still young so don't worry about mistakes you encounter.
I assure you that everything will be just fine~
Am I right or am I wrong?
Well~ Go get your sleep!

If this were to be cast, I’d want Braus and Mitchell star.
Braus seems as though he has a strong personality when acting
and when paired with Mitchel’s slow going vibe, I’m sure that
it would be an amazing comedic scene.

--

--